Does anyone on this website write?

Does anyone on here write? I don't care what you write, just as long as you do. Cause I love to write, and I like to talk with people about it. Here are some examples of what I write. The first one is for my brother, because he got diagnosed with cancer 2 years ago. The second one is completely random and I don't even know what it's about. I just felt like writing something.I really think that I could make the second one into a song, keep in mind though it's not finished...

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Poison pumping through his veins

Just to see who will remain

Basically elimination

All demeaning domination

Just to see who lasts the longest

It can only be the strongest

Every day we take for granted

Makes his extras feel enchanted

It makes my world seem so unjust

Like pain I'm feeling is a must

The pain I feel is uncompared

The pain he feels is always shared

It makes him seem to fade away

Our problems can't be solved today

My world is warped so unreal

I don't remember this part of the deal

So now I try to continue on

With every day is a brand new dawn

I can see that no one knows

Through every problem his strength grows

It brings us closer feelings greater

I know he will get better later

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Lying in a bed of glass

Small puddle of blood

All covered in mud

Turns out someone kicked my ass

He's got my wallet my car

Someone call the cops

I'm sure he didn't get far

I'm looking around

Getting up from the ground

I try to make up the shape through my blood covered eyes

I try to hear all the noise despite all my cries

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Permalink Reply by CorpseQueen on April 12, 2011 at 9:31pm

I don't think ive written anything since highschool :/

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Permalink Reply by 22lliou6xj137 on April 12, 2011 at 10:15pm

i write but not like that, i write about how i feel, it helps aleviate my stress and anger(a large percentage of people annoy me by their simple ignorance)

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Permalink Reply by CorpseQueen on April 13, 2011 at 1:26am

So more like a journal rather then poetry?

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Permalink Reply by Goon on April 13, 2011 at 10:30am

I'm a journal keeper as well, I've written peoms.. but they were dumb little.. things from middle school. xD

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Permalink Reply by Jayy Kelir on April 26, 2011 at 6:50pm

I'm planning on writing a novel. After I get better at drawing manga, I'll draw one. I have an account on allpoetry. I write many fanfictions.

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Permalink Reply by CorpseQueen on April 27, 2011 at 8:28pm

Out of pure boredom here's one of my favorite things i have written..

wet cement around a leafy green
darkness towers to the sky
and light peeks at the earth

warmth from all around
rays in the form of skin
around hips

squeeze

unsplashed from a clamy grasp
like bubbles carried with wind
black wires stretch from here

to there
and little sister scribbles colors on the floor
spewing from fingers to a tree
she thinks of you

and all you hold
of her

let go now
before were forced to take action
p-l-e-a-s-e

dont do this