yesterdays trash

little voice lost, irrational fears, obssesive complusive, phobias here, ritalin child ,no one to care, hallucinations vivid dreams ,blank or fixed stare ,manic deppresive ,delerruim now set ,agrresive dellusions ,suicide no regret, cronic fatigue ,narcaleptic and numb, premature death ,peace to come ,chemical contact ,mental confusion, thank mommy for hell, my life her intrusion,,....

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Permalink Reply by Sonic Architect on October 14, 2008 at 10:55pm

I like it and honestly think the whole comma thing even though you mentioned that it is nto intentional, serves it very well. I think it gives it a very manic and jumbled feel. When I would have severe symptoms and my thoughts would race it would often feel like this. Somehow it made sense sometimes even though they were so fleeting and disorganized.

anyway, thank you for sharing. =)

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