Narrative essay.

So I have to write a three page narrative essay on anything but politics (well it's less limited than that but she said no war or marijuana stuff, so I'm just gunna avoid politics). I was thinking about writing it about how and why I had gotten my mohawk, the consequences that happened socially, and why I chose to get rid of it. But I just can't seem to make the paper work. Sooo, could you guys help me come up with either a different topic, or some way to make the topic I chose already better?

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Permalink Reply by Anya C. London on August 31, 2009 at 3:44am

hmm why not about a pet. or why you dont/do sports. idk i can see me doing one about why i dont play sports. but heres some thing to help you....

"Freak!" is what i heard from most of the kids at my school. Either that or i get the question of "Can i touch your hair?" this was the day after i got my mohawk.

idk and then probably say that you needed a job, of you got ick of everyone's bullshit. just helping out

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Permalink Reply by Segadoway on September 1, 2009 at 12:55am

Write about how good looking i am.

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Permalink Reply by Khaos on September 9, 2009 at 1:54am

win.

=D

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Permalink Reply by Kobalos on September 16, 2009 at 12:16pm

But you'd get extra credit, plus, Sega could wear the travelling shirt too to class! :O

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Permalink Reply by Kobalos on September 19, 2009 at 6:42am

Have you had the grade back on it? How did it go?

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Permalink Reply by sandman on September 1, 2009 at 2:45am

why not write about getting your Mohawk, and how such thing made you feel both emotionally and socially.

you can defiantly make something like that work, how long is it supposed to be?

something along the lines of "emotionally stronger socially weaker"
i cant say how you felt about your hawk, but *IF* you cut it because you coudent take the ridicule(im not saying you did this is just an example) you can talk about how emotionally you felt better about yourself, however the backlash was that you went down in the 'totem of life', and as much as you didn't want to accept such totem existed, the ridicule you took made it all that much more real for you, in which time you decided to cut your Mohawk.

i dunno, i think you can write something good, just sit down and start, thats what i usually do. jsut sit down in front of my computer, and stare at MS word until something hits me.